December 6, 2008

Some Rhymed Lines : Part 1

The face was fresh,
not striking
he noticed,
but new nevertheless.

They met at a place,
that sold many different dreams
and catered everyone,
with hot coffee and sour cream.

So it was coffee they had
their thoughts occupied,
the eyes nonchalant
the doubtful minds spied.

2 comments:

Wyntey said...

hmm .. the setting of a first date .. a little awkward, a little eager and somewhat nervous ...

very lucid.

Ganesh said...

really lucid yet not ordinary...i liked.