December 6, 2008

Some Rhymed Lines : Part 1

The face was fresh,
not striking
he noticed,
but new nevertheless.

They met at a place,
that sold many different dreams
and catered everyone,
with hot coffee and sour cream.

So it was coffee they had
their thoughts occupied,
the eyes nonchalant
the doubtful minds spied.


Wyntey said...

hmm .. the setting of a first date .. a little awkward, a little eager and somewhat nervous ...

very lucid.

Ganesh said...

really lucid yet not ordinary...i liked.